Eff In Right!
That is a really funny flash. I like what you did with it, and that it actually had a meaning to it. AIM: NamFu Nice Job!
some suggestions for your update submission
Ninja Sword is the correct spelling. Also I think it would be much cooler if you had drawn characters killing stickmen. Then that would put you in the not-a-stickman-movie category. But overall pretty good. The other thing is the tweens or whatever you used to animate the moving objects moved kinda slow in some spots. Keep up the good work!
Needs some work
I like parts of this.. I like the part when he says he will buy a new toothbrush and replace it with his. But the comedy is very weak.. Although I did give you a 2/5...
Awesome and here is some things to chew on...
I wanted to say very well done besides anything i suggest here... just felt like some constructive criticism would be helpful ;). There were a few minor things that I noticed that would be easy for you to adjust or think about. 1) The computers seemed to load and work pretty slow for such an advanced age... it took forever for the gun to load. 2) The gun once equipped looked kinda odd at the end of the barrel. It was aiming mostly down from the looks of it, but the hole on the end was a perfect circle making us believe that the gun was aiming directly torwards the screen. The only other VERY minor thing I noticed is the eyes, although really cool looking (for sure). There was a shine on the very top of the eyes as if there was a light source would have been able to make them shine like that... but his 'brow-thing' was sticking out pretty far from his head directly above his eye which looks like it should have blocked the light. I would maybe suggest making the 'brow' smaller or changing the light reflections in the robot's eyes. Again, This entry was super awesome! Just wanted to help make some suggestions that will make it even better!! Peace!
thank you for your review my next movie will be even better than this !
looked like a tv show for children
and I even enjoyed it as well.. haha great job and origionality
i liked the beginning
You are an awesome animator.
I would love to team up with you and do some flash cartoons. I am a good flash artist but cannot do animation for the life of me. I could draw some cool shee-ite and you animate it. let me know... 'NamFu' on AIM or 'NamFu82' on NewGrounds. Peace!
must watch high
THEN vote 5, trust me you'll understand...
trust NamFu82 People...hes a proffesional...he knows what hes talkin about...
Awesome first flash man! Keep it up!
Little bit of practice with flash and reasing some tutorials and you will have some sweet entries.
in the happy 10th episode one, where did u get that hot girl that moves ??
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